Flash Fiction
She walked around the room slowly and quietly. Like a ghostly figure, barely alive. There was no feeling in her chest anymore, just a numb pain that had been there for too long. Only moments ago she had been happy and ready for life. But suddenly, in a blink of an eye that all changed and she felt the pain come back. It had been gone she thought, but it came back from one simple person. Her feelings of not wanting to be came back and everything was not okay.
Dun dun dun... I want to know more. TELL ME MORE! that's an order. I really liked it, youre good at describing the scene.
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